Being a food critic
Hey bloggers, Today I will be telling you about my meal that is chicken. The taste of a roasted chicken tastes like soft, tinder juicy meat. Some things I dislike about it is it can get a bit messy at times, Lets say that your starving and see a chicken leg and your not vegan or veterinarian then you eat it ad eat it and then realise its already done then you check your shirt and theres a bunch of pinces of chicken on you. This would not be a problem if your a tidy eater but for me im a bit of a mess when it comes to meals. Bye bloggers theres my description of a food critic have a wonderful day and make sure to comment if you have to add on or see me do a mistake, Ok bye (:
Ka pai Mohit. I like the descriptive language you've used. Maybe next time you could include some images of the food that you are reviewing. Have you checked out any food blogs online? Lots of people have them.
ReplyDeleteNamaste Mohit,
ReplyDeleteThis is a good attempt at being a food critic - is chicken your favourite meal? I agree with Phil that you have used some great descriptive language. Next time, I'd like to see you add an image to make your blog post more eye catching and check your spelling before you post.
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